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Post by jaime not joined yet on Nov 16, 2005 23:32:47 GMT -5
runs thru wind quickly a white horse with hooves of air floats thru dreams
(i coulda swore a haiku was 5-7-3?)
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Post by jaime not joined yet on Nov 16, 2005 23:35:15 GMT -5
my bad it is 5-7-5...
last line is now:
floats thru my dreams softly
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Post by reya 2 lazy 2 join on Nov 22, 2005 0:13:27 GMT -5
lol, it's the effort that counts! still a rockin' poem, tho!
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